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Dimmer

The light is so dim,
I would slash my wrists only to see color
The light is so weak,
The pistol in my ear feels like nothing
The light is so frail,
The poison in my mouth tastes like candy
The light is so soft,
The contemplation of suicide seems interesting
The light is so muted,
The cliff doesn’t seem so high
The light is so impure,
That as I fall and look to the stars…..
I smile,
But still that infernal light keeps getting….
Dimmer
©2004-2009 ~StandingFailure
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a poem i wrote about my current situation

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:iconstandingfailure:
???

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I am......a Constant Imperfection

-Zaccharia-
:iconstandingfailure:
ITS ROCKO ARE YOU BLIND!?

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I am......a Constant Imperfection

-Zaccharia-
:icondaeira:
Kinda cliché isn't it? Reads more as a list than a poem really. Some imagery and original phrases would do it good.

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Go visit *onewordatatime


There is no I in team - but there is tea! And cookies..?
:iconstandingfailure:
very cliche i admit - not meant to impress the masses

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I am......a Constant Imperfection

-Zaccharia-
:iconalicet:
Well, I may not be the masses, but I really like it. In fact, I belive I will favorite this.

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"I wanted to put a bullet between the eyes of every panda that wouldn't screw to save its species." :jackdirt: or :tombstone:
:iconstandingfailure:
thanks alot

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I am......a Constant Imperfection

-Zaccharia-

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